Saturday, July 9, 2011

My Teacher My Mentor Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the sun shines so we make our hay,
Knowing that it is not here to stay,
And that soon it will fade away,
For as the dawn comes so will the day,
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Shamba Kaunda
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mbali 10 January 2018

we know we can always count on you well done

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Shamba Kaunda 09 July 2011

Akmal thank you and sure im goin to do that, Clara its good that we have teachers in the world and thanx for the comment

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 July 2011

It was a nice poem written with great skill and vivid imagery. I liked and rate it 10. Kindly read and rate my new poem 'Monalisa' on page1.

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 09 July 2011

A true gratifying poem about teacher. I like this poem. Its nice :)

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Shamba Kaunda

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