Sunday, October 24, 2010

My Tea Cup Comments

Rating: 5.0

O, thou look me as a cup of wine,
As the reflection of my soul shines,
Or a good poem with delicious lines,
What is thy like? But thou surely mine.
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Mohammad Muzzammil
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Bernard Snyder 04 April 2011

Another great expression Mohammad! Your style of writing reminds me of the great Shakespeare! Very nice.

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Bernard Snyder 04 April 2011

Another great expression Mohammad! Your style of writing reminds me of the great Shakespeare! Very nice.

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Amy Marie 16 December 2010

Other than the old English, this is my favorite one of your poems. It's very well written :)

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Ata Ata 07 December 2010

I like this poem because I saw myself as a cup of tea too, you have a huge imagination if you can do that.There is a magic in tea, I am sure about that. Thanks for sharing thoughts through poetry.

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Marissa Butler 24 October 2010

You used symbolism really well in this poem! I doubt I could have portrayed myself as a tea cup any better!

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Mohammad Muzzammil

Mohammad Muzzammil

Bahraich, India
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