My Sweetheart Comments

An insightful depiction of a loving relationship - a voyage of pure bliss, elegantly brought forth from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Blessing and do remain enriched.

Oh, Cripes! Whose is your sweetheart! A great message and well drafted and crafted poem. I wonder in boundless amazement to read these poetic line........ 'My sweetheart, my reality My sweetheart, my ray in the dark Mountaintop is our footsteps to the heavens There, our spirit dances with out a drum' Two thumps up - one to appreciate the beauty of the poem and yet another to pat the shoulder of the poet. Well done! With many wishes to the poet cheers!

True love is a tonic so dear! A beautiful piece.

Yes that person can be regarded as every thing who makes one's heart sweet.nice

i soar without a wing...most beautiful sentiment :) i loves this poem

I am so glad you have a sweetheart which causes you to write such sweet poetry... Love gives one a spring in the step, makes you sing such beautiful ballads such as these...

I love this poem its really good. You sound like you really love someone.

Love is on top of everything, , good one!

Good poem. Theres nothing better than love. Great write. May i invite you to read my poem called dreams of a child.