My Sweet, Lonely, Little, World Comments
Come, step
into my sweet, lonely little world!
Hand in hand,
We shall run across the cliffs
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Perhaps if I cherish WILD FANCIES, SECRETS, and EMOTIONS as you do, I too will find sweetness in my own lonely world.// On the outside you seemed a demure Mathematics student, but inside were heights of fancy, depths full of secrets, and precarious cliffs that overlooked crashing tides.
It is a beautiful poem on loneliness having stunning and thrilling expression. The way of presentation and penmanship is highly appreciated. Thanks for sharing.
This is wonderful little world created by the poet where she has carefully curated her loneliness, emotions, fancies and the secrets of her heart. It's so lovely to have a peep into this world. Thanks. Come, step.... into my sweet, lonely little world! and when weary and hungry, eat the Forbidden Fruit.........
Of course, Sonali. With you in it, it is no longer lonely, but it is sweeter.
A nice world with the muse of your love. Thanks for sharing.
ur poem make us knw dt how sweat life and how lonely world is, when world is loney is mean so sullen and great. Good for share this poem
its my pleasure to shoot & cover you lovely poem. such a great poetry you wrote & perfom it very well..... :) (Y)
A lonely world is sometimes very peaceful but how long? A day comes it does not remain lonely. A nice poem.
You have portrayed your 'sweet, lonely little world' so beautifully, and thanks for taking us around. It's a sweet poem that I liked to read. 'Fly through the capricious clouds Through which my wild fancies fly, Swim in the deep waters of the sea in which lie buried the secrets of my heart, ' These lines are really beautiful.
the invitation to your little world shows that you don't want to continue with this loneliness...a beautiful poem with poetic merits...
This poem reads so well and honest that I feel like reading it again and again. The theme is a common reference to most of us but the imagery and style are very special and pronounced. ....10....
There are many worlds. You paint your landscape with a poignant brush.10, for your sensitivity. Warmest regards, Sandra
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Fly through the capricious clouds Through which my wild fancies fly, Swim in the deep waters of the sea in which lie buried the secrets of my heart, ....lofty expression. Loved the use of hyperbole. Top score!