Tuesday, April 5, 2005

My Sweet Little Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I watch you dance and play, you say
“Mummy, will I be a dancer? ”
And I say..
“Darling, with your little feet,
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Nasra Al Adawi 20 April 2005

Im touched by this voice 'the Voice of a mother'

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Solitary Man 05 April 2005

very charming, Jodi. some very nice touches here.

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David Nelson Bradsher 05 April 2005

A sweet little poem, Jodi. I like the simplicity of it.

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Lenchen Elf 05 April 2005

Quite lovely Jodi, 'soften the roughest edges of the earth' a sweet thought : -)

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