My Sweet Glance Comments

A very warm sweet love story. Well done! Keep writing and sharing. A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

Hi Reshma, after reading the other comments on this poem I feel like a voyeur looking in on a mutual admiration society, the piece was 'Shakespearean', but I found it rather passionless, a speech of acquiescence and measured metre.I think the dove was inner spirit leaving.

Thank you for bringing this quality write to my attention, Reshma, A true reading experance.

Then it will turn into a dove Which flies away as we watch hand in hand

Hats off to your imagination....A sword becoming a red rose and then into a dove...it is terrific..........as beautiful as u are..........10000000000000

well...good romantic poetic dialogue between you and Sadiq, Reshma...i think this is hotting up...the poems are getting warmer and warmer...once again a good expressive write where lines retain poetic beauty...10

Owe, , , , , , , reshma, , , you are such a complement, , , , , , , , , , , , i am rather embarassed, , u know, , ,

yes seema you should he is one of the most talented person i have ever met

enjoyed your thoughts.....got to see what sadiq had written!

You enjoy seeing others 'smouldering' by your love, , , I saw a dream last night, ,10++

A lovely and touching poem i would say, eloquently expressed - in your own unique way! splendid read reshma! *10plus*! Friend Thad

The sequels are like acts in a Shakeperean play, , , , timeless conversations in poetry, , , deeply emotional, , Reshma you are truly talented, ,10 and much much more from me, , loved reading it, ,