Wednesday, January 25, 2012

My Sweet Bottle Of Gin Comments

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Someday i looked up into the bright blue sky.
I couldn't imagine that he could lie.
So i shout to him, why, oh, why do i love him?
No answer, i put the bottle to my mouth.
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Hilal Yilmaz
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Dave Walker 25 January 2012

A really great poem, great write. Like it. May i invite you to read my new poem called, An Angel Cries.

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Carsten Thomsen 25 January 2012

...for the troubled lives of rich kids Heads & Bellies full of liquid bread (Or Gin)

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