Monday, December 7, 2015

My Sweet Addict My Dove Comments

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The heart's flirts with the seven roses,
were merely impulses,
ended with the changing weathers,
but a rose of spring,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Abhilasha Bhatt 28 February 2016

you can see its dry petals, kept carefully in the book of love...... These two lines reminds me few lines of the ghazal written by Ahmad faraz sir..... Abke ham bichde to shayad kabhi khwabon main mile Jis tarah sookhe hue phool kitaboon main mile.........as usual am amazing poem.....thank you for sharing :)

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Valsa George 11 December 2015

but a rose of spring, blossomed to live for ever, .........! She is a dove who refuses to fly out even if the cage is kept open! So deep is her attachment to you! Enjoyed the poem where love is immortalized!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2015

I stored beauty, you can see a bird in my open cage, ..Very wise reflection of sweet love of dove is shared in this interesting poem definitely. Fantastic sharing done.10

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