My Sweat Comments

Sir, How well you bring out the social injustices in your poems.... they who toil in the sun don't bear a grudge against their more fortunate brethren....and yet the fortunate ones are happy sitting in their ac cubicles doing nothing for the deprived...they are busy chasing dreams of earning millions. This is India with its many contradictions. Sob! India Sob!

dear sir, what a write this is.......how well you have penned...........last week i was wondering the same things about the carpenters who did my house....it was sad..and they are so talented..good write sir

Apart from the harsh realities brought out by this poem, -it also made me to pause and think! I thought of Longfellow's Village Blacksmith, who lived & toiled by the sweat of his brows to earn his day's honest living! And he looked a man straight in the face - for he owed no man! -Raj Nandy

bhayya its a great write indeed a bitter reality of life...thanks for sharing ++10

a wonderful composition.

Wow! ! ! ! thoughts that lie too deep for human tears.

the world is the highest seat of learning for most...

The words and the message contained in the words of a civilized man are always worth recommending. For there is wisdom. GW62

Dear Sathya, please read Black Poet's poetry if you can manage. This piece of yours touched my heart. Really it is an excellant piece.

The last line... is heart wrenching!

Truth.......I like the second paragraph.