Monday, August 7, 2006

My Sunshine......(To My Daughter) Comments

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my sunshine,
came to me
on a day that it poured with rain,
a little bundle so beautiful, so defenseless,
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Arti Chopra
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Vaughn Bekker 23 May 2010

beautiful piece of work, wow, is it not wonderful to love ones child so much, they fill a place in your heart that is meant only for them, well done

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Tranquil Ocean 30 August 2006

You, my darling are my inner sun You are the song that I will hum Today, tomorrow and forever Your inner light I shall devour You are the ink on my heart that will never blur The calligraphy etched deep inside You have fulfilled a deep void You are my baby, my love, my joy, my pride Beautiful ode to your daughter.... Love TO

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Minku Mahajan 13 August 2006

hey sorry for that mistake! but it was more of a typing mistake u see! any way pardon me for that yeah u still love ur daughter and ill always love her! sorry again!

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Minku Mahajan 11 August 2006

great poem! u loved ur daughter very much!

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