My Sunset Comments

OMG! This is just awesome. It has put a smile on my face as if it was My Sunrise & that is what poetry is about! LOVE IT.

Such a beautiful poem, so visual. I can almost feel the sun on my skin as it sets. It makes me actually want to watch a sunset, to see for myself the beauty of a sunset (something I have never watched) :) Tiana xx

Beautiful sunset poem - you may like to read mine entitled Sunset.

Dear Young Poet, we can see the Sun daily, I think, only in Summer. Being caught in Melbourne, I am not able to go out in Winter. One or two times, for one or two hours, the Sun is visible. Now I know, why the people from cold countries come to Chennai(Tamil Nadu, India) and lie on the beach with miniwares/biknis. The Sun is the Almighty to Australia. Well written poem.Shades of colours and the clouds sink into your heart and burst forth colourful lines. The lines make aesthetic appeal to mind and eye. Wonderful.

Theo, this is another fine work you've produced... very descriptive... beautiful images... Wonderful... Terry

Sublime! ! ! Wonderful poem, very descriptive, Well rhymed - with rational thought. You are a great talent and I think you know that.

Other than the spelling mistakes, it is a lovely poem with lots of imagery. Seriously a wonderful poem for a beautiful sunset. Great job on this one! ! !

the fantastic write purely expressing the beauty of sunset.very nice

What you have done is help me feel a sunset emotionally. Beautiful Theo and well done.

A beautiful description of the sunset which really captivated my feelings and the vivid image of your sunset became crystal clear. Amazing 10.

Hey, you asked me to help you with your mistakes, right? Well I've found 2 for you to fix (: In the first part, fourth line, colours, is actually spelt COLORS. And the second one is in the third part, favourite, is actually FAVORITE. I really love this one, you are really good! Keep up the good work. I will check out your other ones in the next day or so and let you know what I think/find.

Nice one, runs well, lookin forward to more.

A majestic portrait! ...in soothing words. It's a brilliant write and I enjoyed it.

beautiful poem, I really enjoyed reading it=))

Painted very well, like i am looking it right now..Also a second poem i read from u and second yes to agree that you are a talented poet..It always happen when you pour all visions, feelings in the poetry it really help to sound like it is a moving scenery, alive when we read in each time we finish the line..keep it up_Unwritten Soul

Very beautiful description of the sunset! Quite like my sunset Theo. Well done

thats more like it, enjoyed, innocent and true..lovely write...keep penning boy..

I enjoyed reading the poem. With practice over time the flow and the rhythm will improve. Remember this is only my opinion. Other readers might view it differently.

Fluffy white clouds, into my heart they sink. I won't feel hurt, nor feel any pain, Because on your way down, your beauty will reign. I especially liked these lines........

sun rises n set for everyone but each has the knack of personalizing the natural process...