Thursday, June 28, 2012

My Sunrise Comments

Rating: 4.9

The chirp of birds in the early morning
Bless my smiles with their innocent calling
I head outside with my blanket wrapped around
And lay there listening to this memorable sound.
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Theo Williams
COMMENTS
Rishi Kaashyap 20 December 2012

A Wonderful Piece Mr. Theo... Keep Writing :) Rishi

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Kallan Keogh 01 July 2012

You, sir, are a great poet. I love the way you worded it. I think it's great and you should never stop writing. :) ~K

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Aisha Alansari 01 July 2012

Cool.. ao inspirational.. I really like your poems

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Hamid Negah 30 June 2012

Lovely, your poems is everytime in top.

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Hamid Negah 30 June 2012

Lovely, your poem is everytime in top.

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Hamid Negah 30 June 2012

Lovely, your poem is everytime in top.

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Yewande Adedokun 30 June 2012

ah, dis one takes me away, i wont return with d night until another sunrise comes from you.

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eloida Capuno 29 June 2012

That was nice, keep writing!

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 June 2012

A very nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with. E.K.L.

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Jinal Oswal 29 June 2012

Wow! ! ! you write amazing....! ! !

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Otonye Daniel 29 June 2012

Goodly written! Its a master piece

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Natasha Hochar 29 June 2012

Lovely. Your writing captivates.

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Natasha Hochar 29 June 2012

Lovely. Your writing captivates.

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Anita Sehgal 29 June 2012

beautifully expressed... blessings

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Young Church Poetry 29 June 2012

The most beautiful poem, painted a beautiful picture in my head.

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Ken E Hall 28 June 2012

Very good composition on the early morning start...it reflects reality to the tee thanks for this indeed...regards

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Georgia B 28 June 2012

This is beautiful :)

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Terry O'leary 28 June 2012

Wonderful poem... very invigorating to read... another good one... splendid... Terry

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Sallam Yassin 28 June 2012

DEAR THEO GOD BLESS IT IS GREAT REFLACTION OF THE NATURE AND FEELIN OF MAN

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Valerie Dohren 28 June 2012

Lovely poem about the sun rising - you may like to read mine entitled Sunrise.

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