The chirp of birds in the early morning
Bless my smiles with their innocent calling
I head outside with my blanket wrapped around
And lay there listening to this memorable sound.
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You, sir, are a great poet. I love the way you worded it. I think it's great and you should never stop writing. :) ~K
ah, dis one takes me away, i wont return with d night until another sunrise comes from you.
A very nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with. E.K.L.
The most beautiful poem, painted a beautiful picture in my head.
Very good composition on the early morning start...it reflects reality to the tee thanks for this indeed...regards
Wonderful poem... very invigorating to read... another good one... splendid... Terry
DEAR THEO GOD BLESS IT IS GREAT REFLACTION OF THE NATURE AND FEELIN OF MAN
Lovely poem about the sun rising - you may like to read mine entitled Sunrise.
A Wonderful Piece Mr. Theo... Keep Writing :) Rishi