Friday, May 29, 2009

**my Sundays Comments

Rating: 2.9

And when I held together my bones
By the pull of a leather belt with buckle
A symbolic leaf of Adam still I felt
The nakedness in nature on my shoes
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Saadat Tahir 29 May 2009

ya all the days every day...every which way vey nice lines cheers

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Ejaz Khan 29 May 2009

Bareness is already the hallmark for many, but does the civilisation need this pre-expulsion state? A beautiful poem, greetings!

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Kesav Easwaran 29 May 2009

good sunday scene you give...yours! thanks

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Mamta Agarwal 29 May 2009

amazing poem, the mood is brooding, nostalgic Bareness shall return once the civilzation grows from this point to openness and the poet goes on a journey backward in time - aroma of fresh bread, time to halt and stare, enjoy. life is to br celebrated each moment, not postponed for an opportune moment. 10+++ Mamta

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