Saturday, June 4, 2016

My Sun Shines Comments

Rating: 4.5

My sun shines day and night
Since simply it shines from within
I never try to hide its bright
Since quickly it makes me grin
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Soha Zidan
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Bill Cantrell 14 June 2016

What a very lovely poem, all flowers share the same sunlight but they each need their own space to grow and a solitary flower looks good in a vase but there is a sadness for those afraid to touch it for fear of a thorn...your words inspired me. A 10 for sure.

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Soha Zidan 14 June 2016

What a comment, Bill! Thanks for your kind words.

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Tom Billsborough 14 June 2016

Yes, we must strive to own our space. It's a very mature poem. Tom Billsborough

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Soha Zidan 14 June 2016

You reading my poems is a pleasure, Tom.

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