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Silence sprawled all over, people's eyes scanning me.
Finding quiver in voice, beholding shuddering, trembling me
I stood in screaming silence, pressing lips banning its twitch
Gulping tangled burden as salty water raced down my cheeks.
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Very well written poem, I like how you compare depression to a wolf preying on people. In Kashmir where I am from, I think a lot of people suffer from depression. Please review my 'Sword And Shield' and 'Blessings Upon You O Child' if you have the time. Thanks for Sharing Hafsa
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7/28/2025 10:12:24 PM # 1.0.0
A different poem written in a touching style.