Thursday, October 19, 2006

My Suicide Comments

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As I walked over a hill in my dream...
a graveyard came into view.
A circle of people all dressed in black
...
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Lance Carthen
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Melvina Germain 19 October 2006

Well that was certainly a rude awakening wasn't it. I hope you understood the message, I sure did. Clearly suicide would never be the answer. You paint a very vivid picture my friend, the imagry is clear and crucial for the reader to understand. Thanks for sharing--Melvina---

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Joshua Fegley 19 October 2006

A very morbid poem, touching. Later....

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Allan James Saywell 19 October 2006

i get excited when i dream about suicides everbody dressess in colourfull cloths at my funerals suicide is a dying business AJS

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