My Suicide Comments

dear min, in this world, nothing is fresh except death.... well penned... 10 votes

...'This air that I breathe Soon will never be fresh'... Beautiful line...adds more severity to the situation you create in this write...strong scented, strong imagined write...ten for you, Min

Remarkably, beautiful minor....10.. thank you for sharing, Min best wishes Tsira

This poem is nicely written and life surely can be like a chain where it becomes hard to breathe though a creative soul always finds the creative way to let emotions flow.

ohhhhhhh! ! mam' you are one talented lady.....well penned!