Monday, May 5, 2008

My Suicide Comments

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I sit here staring into the dark lonely, sad and angry.
I look in my broken window and I see the stars.
I grab at the glass shards on the ledge.
Next, I am screaming in the confines of my prison cell in this place I call home.
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Stone Granite 05 May 2008

Your pen will provide you much more confort than any shard of glass. Powerful stuff for anyone, let alone 12. I hope you find what you are looking for. Your poem has given me pause, so you've impacted at least someone with your pen. Stone

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Mark Nwagwu 05 May 2008

with poemhunter, Mindy, you dont have to think suicide. just write beautiful poems and we'll all read you and make you smile.

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Mindy Brown

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