Saturday, February 18, 2017

My Story Of Her Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watch her faking a smile to hide her wounds
How do I tell her I've come to share the woe.

She sits in silence, stubborn and determined
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Pankti Vadalia
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Fog Runner 22 February 2018

My Story of Her Silence is a stunning section of writing that somehow slipped under the cracks around here. There would otherwise be a long strand of adoring praises collected beneath it... Great job as your respectable emotions are smothered all over these lines.

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 July 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Pankti. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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