Saturday, November 29, 2008

My Story - More Added :) Comments

Rating: 4.8

**Ok I'm actually trying to write a novel composed completely of poems, this is the beginning, comment plz 3**

Leaves silently drift to the ground,
Gracefully, yet carelessly, forming a mound
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Sylvi Hart
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Izik Alcox 10 December 2008

As an intended first part of a collection to make a book it's very interesting thus far, good rhymes and motion, hope to read the rest.

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Ian Singer 09 December 2008

very good you are a great writer

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Sylvi Hart

Sylvi Hart

Peterborough, ON
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