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A honest page out of life. I endorse Nosheen's feedback. Well-written piece

A highly crafted poem with insight.

Full ***** for this wonderful story.

To overcome such tragedy in life is no joke, it takes a lot to fight back. Your poem deals with such situation and in the end you are what you did, I liked the Pep talk with self-Part.

To get back on track is a win over self, you did it nicely and expressed through poetry perfectly.

An inspiring poem that everyone can relate to. Well done!

Very powerful piece of writing with a great message. Self-reliance is the only way to survive the battles of life. Strength comes from within. Bravo!

Bravo I love the last stanza

Beautiful poem Pallavi.......10

Not the avalanche and earthquakes underneath. This saga of recovery is strong and powerful.Bless you for sharing your pain.

You remind me of love's intimidating power; it is a force of nature and not to be trifled with. The poem portrays the power of your soul to feel love, and to recover after failure lays you low.

A great poem.It is the beginning of a new 'You' and your new found determination will surely take you in the path of success.