My Story Comments

You are serving L-O-V-E with every resource imaginable. There is something heroic about your commitment because this is a dangerous time to be actively supporting love against forces hostile to it. Those forces have imprisoned you at the end but you are simply using the confinement of your body to release your loving spirit to continue your advocacy of love. I am interpreting your poem as a kind of narrative; it strikes me as a poem of struggle with no still center that would give lovers a chance to be together and experience the sweetness of love. But perhaps efforts like hers will benefit future couples.