Tuesday, February 16, 2016

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It is so slim big
story to tell,
And it would ever
be unfair not to air,
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Palitha Ranatunge 16 February 2016

This is a very good poem, about poverty and its outcome not as a heroic task but since there was no way out to be heroic or hectic in winning a bread. You are great and I like your following writings very much: 'A little child little but worn with glossary of tedious past' 'But I sank my saliva Belly bare the scarcity' 'That is life misbehave The world will hear it from my mouth'

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