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A very frank and touching write..Winnie

A very touching, moving piece...I hope your future will no longer be plagued by the past.....this poem touches the heart.....

a sad story.. I believe we all have different sad story, we all have our trials.. Trails can make us stronger, but it can also make us weak if we don't fight it, if we let it overcome us... in your part, i believe your a strong person and i salute you for that...

A sad poem very well penned, I hope that someday you will be able to put all these memories behind you.10

I enjoyed this poem (not enjoyed..not the right word) I can relate to this writing. I am new to this posting my poetry, so if you have time and can read some of mine, I would really appreciate feedback/advice. Thanks for sharing. xoxoxoxo- Je, Jennifer, Or Just Me

a great dedication in the shape of love

When we are young and terrible things happen we are sadly embossed with it in our memories, then when Lancelot on his horse called True Love arrives the world is your oyster...thats your poem++++++10 regards uavaniceday

strong emotions with good usage of rhyme...kindly read my poem ' embossed' thanks : -) regards rinzu

a very nice poem. opened the heart for every one to see. heart touching too. nice flow voted10 surya

very nice... it just shows how strong you are. :)

i love it! ! ! i hope some day you will be able to forgive yourself for the mistakes you've made. beautifully wrote with feeling and truth

Well writen good write

I like the idea of another chapter But what happens if its never written? Great poem 10+++ Unique