Monday, May 25, 2009

My Storm Is Over Comments

Rating: 2.5

The clouds is dark outside
My life is spinning around to fast
I have no friends by my side
Family turn their back on me
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Jovahn Davis
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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 24 July 2012

I Liked how u compared the problem with a storm... I identify with the poem very well..cz I always think my home is suffering a tornado when problems happen :) : D

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Michael Pruchnicki 25 May 2009

Jay Jovahn, wake up and smell the metaphors frying!

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