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Was walking by the sea with a heavy heart
Trying to figure myself out
The air was cool, the stars were bright
My heart was cold, hurt and tight
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Creative and original use of a beach pebble as a metaphor for heaviness of heart, and casting the stone out to represent unburdening oneself. Nice, sincere poem. Good work. Look forward to reading more of yours.
Lovely share... welcome to PH. Keep penning them One Peace at a time
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7/27/2025 9:49:13 AM # 1.0.0
rise the new you. i love sea myself that i wrote a lot of my poems by the sea. lovely poem. i hope that it is that easy to let go. hmmm... good luck.md.