Wednesday, January 11, 2006

My Stetson Comments

Rating: 4.5

To keep my brain from foggin'
I wear my Stetson hat
It does wonders for my noggin
I've learned to count on that
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Stanley Cooper
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Chuck Audette 13 January 2006

Stanley, very fun poem! Loved the line ' forget what I've forgot'. I did think the next to last stanza was clunky, though, and it stands out that you've used 'with' to rhyme with 'with' (ugh, I won't try saying that again!) - chuck

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Rusty Daily 11 January 2006

Stanley, this really good funny stuff.

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