Tuesday, June 12, 2018

My Stars Comments

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On every night I stare, Blank sky above
I see my Stars So far apart
Thought It seems to be like this
I know that side by side they seems so close enough
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Roderick Narrido
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Jazib Kamalvi 20 September 2020

Write comment. Such a nice start, Roderick N. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 13 June 2018

Beautiful piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and inspiring. Thanks for sharing Roderick and do remain enriched.

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Hans Vr 12 June 2018

There is some certainty that the stars do shine, no matter how cloudy the skies. When they are hidden from our eyes, we can let them shine in our heart. Very inspiring and thought provoking poem.

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Roderick Narrido 13 June 2018

Thank you... my first ever poem written for public...

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Robert Murray Smith 12 June 2018

A nice poem. A poet can get inspiration from any source. Nature and the universe are particularly inspirational. ++10

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Roderick Narrido 13 June 2018

Thank you... I really do like look up, specially in the night sky every time I feel down...

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