I notice my mother's softness
Against a hard edge citywide,
Cold concrete runs towards the incoming tide.
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my favorite list and all the stars in the world! ! ! ! 100000000000+++++++++++++++++++++++++++*******************
Gorgeous! Utterly gorgeous! ! The power of your descriptives and the vitality of your vivid memories, and your pen breathed life into this glimpse of your Mother! ! ! I am totally in love with this poem and it is so well titled! ! ! ! 1ooooooooooooooo stars shine from the soul of this! ! ! !
beautiful Tribute Poem on the sense of remembrance /// Mohter the heaven according to Muhammadism Heaven is situated under the feet of a mother; yeah, those who behaves his/her mother well always he/she builds a palace in heaven (accordance of Islamic law)
It is really a great tribute to your mother in which the memories of childhood have been so touchingly delineated. I cite....Her smile is a Kingdom of hot dinners, hugs, a discovery there is light in dark skies, / I snuggle into her lap and I listen to the leaping crackle of firewood, / Her gentle breath rises and falls with her light scent of a rosebud.....In the inky black night her Star is my only light. Nice work. Thanks.
'In the inky black night her Star is my only light.' This last line sums up the whole sentiments you keep for your loving mom! Going back to childhood days and nestling in the memories of loved ones always give a kickstart to life! Enjoyed this lovely tribute to your mother!
My respect and best wishes to your 'beautiful, loving and kind mother' wherever she is! 'In the inky black night her Star is my only light' - an appropriate concluding line to a brilliant tribute!