Thursday, February 3, 2011

My Stalwart Metamorphosis Comments

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Up in the apex of a Ferris Wheel,
Looking down at where you live: going nowhere, turning
Around,
Like a tear falling on your roof to sleep,
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Robert Rorabeck
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Bob Thomas 03 February 2011

I enjoyed the imagery and word smithing that you crafted into this one. The idea seems to be unique and not an emotional puck. Cool, observational and well done!

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