My Springs Comments

Flows in the ear like a sweet breeze from the south of GEORGIA when it is on my mind where the moon lies high! Paul

As beautiful a stanza as you can hope to find anywhere, full of love and melody - - - - - - - - - - -] Dear eyes, dear eyes and rare complete - Being heavenly-sweet and earthly-sweet, - I marvel that God made you mine, For when He frowns, 'tis then ye shine!

Here I enjoyed this poem with a lot of happiness it gives.

Being heavenly sweet is what poetry needs to be. Great. Thank you poet.

......beautiful....two springs pouring into the lake of dreams is a beautiful metaphor ★

A most beautiful tribute for the wife and mothers' love. When God frowns it is their love that shines and protects. In their eyes full with tears they carry the burden placed upon themselves in the path of love. Enjoyed this poem with it's soft dream like flowy rhythm and style.

Mind blowing and captivating flow of the poem is a marvel in itself. Thanks for sharing it here.

In art and nature! Thanks for sharing.