My Spring Time Comments

Beautiful! What a parade of true emotions and corresponding images. I love the interplay the three-line passages with the two-line passages. There is a call and response pattern it creates, and that gives your poem a unique dynamism. And besides it is filled with gratitude expressed in simple language, no false gushing of emotions we cannot trust. Your poem speaks to me with integrity. And in the very last phrase - THE SONG I ONLY WROTE FOR YOU - you tenderly and quietly turn the poem of spring into a Love Poem!