On the twirling wings
Of a warm wind blown
Through my rainbow
Colored spiral dreams
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When wings are dancing-winnowing- blowing the wind- heart throbs for someone a feeling is created and the feeling is of rainbow colors Spiral - deep and deep -solving un solving then dreams enter within dreams - complexity - undefined deep love..very fantastic wonderful that's what I can say :
A fantastic poem, the best I have ever read, you are better than Shakespeare, Keats, Ted Hughes, Sylivia Plath, put together, you should win the Nobel Prise for Literature instantly...
Nice write, I would (perhaps write it like this) On the twirling wings of a warm wind blown of a rainbow in spirals that runs me to you.
On the twirling wings Of a warm wind blown Through my rainbow Colored spiral dreams I run to your dreams creating oneness with colourful rainbow...it is simple with clear mesage.....10 read mine colour......anywhere and home bound
I do like this poem, as it evokes memories of an especially happy time.10
Spiral curve connection between two thoughts is similar to the rainbow. This is the key to this poem.Epithet'' warm wind''comes like to acknowledge the tension of thought. A very beautiful poem.10++
you express your dreams your love colorfully there...sweet lines...10
'Through my rainbow Colored spiral dreams I run to your dreams' Small and wonderful poem. Love...10+
Warm wind blows on the twirling wings. This is excellently penned. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.10