Thursday, December 4, 2008

My Spilled Cup Of Tea Comments

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Dumb of heart of mine missed the blow,
Summer days are frozen by my tongue of snow,
The clock ticks away the chance;
The music played, I refused to dance.
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Juneil Sechico
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Great rhythm and rhyme Juneil. Terrific imagery too! love Karin oops! I mean Granny

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Fay Slimm 10 December 2008

'Sun shone over my head' - 'Salty rains shed' - these are both good reflections from a good poetic mind. I like your title too - - it puts a question mark in the reader's mind, and gives food for thought.....keep writing.... best wishes from Fay.

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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