My Special Gift Comments

Good write well express my friend

love is a special gift...woman is truely a gift...sharing is a gift...returning love is a gift...when you speak of another...and it feel you inside and outside..you have been blessed by God...and that is the best gift of all...good..keep up your inner flow..share it..always...

Fresh and still, you sang that song with glee That your arms and your shoulders are only for me Fortunately, there would be none like you ‘Cause I believe that my special gift is you… THIS IS MY FAV... I LOVE IT.. Really Really beautiful poem .. sounds ohh soo romantic :)

lovely....a beautiful poem i really liked the last stanza.. well done! !

Honest and constructive comment: 1, 'I feel like abhorred' should be ' I feel abhorred' 2, 'There is no definite any' is grammatically wrong - 'There is none really' would suffice. 3, Rewrite and edit the poem and read it aloud to 'feel the flow' and the direction of thought you wish to convey. Reviews that are sugar-coated and not analytical may boost the writer's ego but these do not HELP him write better. One will just remain writing the same mistakes and not learn, because all he hears are positive BUT not constructive views.

Expressive. Well penned.

that was a really beautiful poem

Believing your lover to be your 'special gift' is very romantic and hones Sheldon - - a very special poem.

My, my my Sheldon, you're a special gift to the poets world...A sweet poem by a gifted poet. The vivid images and the manner in which you order your word around from stanza to stanza were refreshing. a solid 10+++

wow... you really said here what you want and what you meant. poem is well penned