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A soul-nourishing piece. It's breath-taking to see you write this way. Kudos!

.in global world.....I'm a human being.... ....in my world.....I'm the spiritual being.....' I agree with you

the take off is wonderful... try to attempt smaller poems. they train u on how to be crisp in ur expression...

I'll be honest to you, I read the poem twice to actual relate and find the wonderful and quite interesting content behind these words, and here am I for the joy of pleasure I went on to read it agÀin, I was so amazed, its a very sweet write, your a good write, what can I say, The_African_Son

good to soul mind To be a moonbeam all time, laugh at your foolishness, accept yourself, forgive yourself, which is a helping job you're not installed so far;

Swetha, it very encouraging poem, you know when you wrote a poem like this it actually remind yourself too and much on others, i like this poem...Ego is a poison to blackening the purity of our soul...but we are human that we still have it carries on our heart, but protect your soul with true understanding and feeling, may it will give you a nice order to follow in white and pure humanity...keep writing poem, it has good value to read this :) _Unwritten Soul