My Souls Talk Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

My Souls Talk

Rating: 5.0


When going is smooth
Any layman can sail
And can sing happily
What’s great about you?
Hey shaky timid soul

When earth is green
Any fake can lead
And can reap weed
What’s great in you?
Hey dusky tiny soul

When wind is right
Any dog can fight
And can win sight
What’s great in that?
Hey fusty cold soul

When sky is clear
Any bird can fly
And can flap high
What’s great in it?
Hey gusty coy soul

When things are clear
When time is right
When farm is green
When life is smooth
Any soul can shine

But it takes great
Soul, to rise high
And to sing happily
Even if life is hard
Said my soul to me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janell Cressman 01 June 2009

speaks of wisdom, strength, and courage, amazing write! ! ! !

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Louis Rams 01 June 2009

high as the sky, and free as the bee, your soul has just come to me. i feel your soul.

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keep going on.. lovely.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 01 June 2009

When going gets tough, tough gets going.................A Good Write..........

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Joseph Poewhit 01 June 2009

Adversity does spark the greatness in some people

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Lee Crowell 05 June 2009

'when wind is right any dog can fight'... what a phrase, and now it's my new slogan another exceptional poem from a master I humbly bow to you sir and thanks for sharing this

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Eyan Desir 05 June 2009

Nice poem Great flow 10s

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Joseph Poewhit 05 June 2009

Water will fund it's level

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Kesav Easwaran 02 June 2009

souls' talk...reflective...reads good...thanks for inviting me to read this poem

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Eyan Desir 02 June 2009

Good flow plus rhymes

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