Wednesday, November 26, 2008

My Soul Sink But I Laugh Comments

Rating: 5.0

whirlwinds whip a whirlpool in the ocean
where my soul lives

From a violent tempest blows the waves
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Iron Man
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Indira Renganathan 09 September 2009

Such is love...making you smile hearing the lover's voice even while sinking in death-abyss breathing last...impressive and interesting poem

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Shashendra Amalshan 15 August 2009

Hey my darling Iron Man.. this is goood... I love narrative poems.. you have written a good one here.. enjoyed reading this one.. lovess shan

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Akram Saqib 15 June 2009

great juxtaposing of ideas

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Anjali Sinha 28 March 2009

yep -- so close yet sooooooooo far away lovely thoughts dear iron man certainly 10 from me

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Very Interesting Read. Thanks for Sharing. 10 From Me! -Brie

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