Tuesday, October 14, 2008

My Soul Mate* Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the waves crashed against my body
the refreshing cool water relaxed me
but as he drew near I became hot and anxious
for him to take me into my world
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Mrs. Cynosure
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Stacey Watts 01 March 2009

Wow! I loved this piece the imagery is just fantastic. Pulling passion from the deepest of you core being. What a wonderful way to express that.

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Sebastine Humaemo 17 December 2008

wow really awesome.......all through pleasant and passionate.....true love and care mixed in your words...............sebastine

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Saint Cynosure 10 November 2008

Beautiful and so passionate, this poem is awesome...

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