I try....
Try hard
To flee,
But don't succeed,
...
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You have placed here a modest poem. Two striking phrases/sentences of your poem that I liked most are: ‘my soul is deeply entwined with thee' ‘thy old and refined things'. Full marks for this impeccable piece!
Dear Anjandev, the use of ‘thee', ‘thou', ‘thy' is hardly found in modern poetry. However, I relish this much popular and conventional lingo to my utmost pleasure.
I enjoyed this read, my friend, challenging and satisfying at one and the same time! Gave you top marks!
A beautiful piece nicely put together. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched...