My Soul Comments

sad is not bad in fact beautiful.. worth weaving into poetry and words real worth u made it!

Your pain is so genuine, you are a broken heart; It is always the body, The soul will never part. Meeting and parting Are waves on the Sea, They appear and disappear, But the Ocean will ever be.

You have natural lliterary largess...'tis be a shame if your storyline be from an auto-biographical vein....Death, when we steal it from Destinies pre-determined dominion....in my world, and opinion, would be far worse, and final...then living our all too short lives, upon ocassional shouldered Cross. Solid Work, here...D.R.A.N. ! ~ Fjr ~ ..2008..