My Soul Comments

a lovely tribute to your daughter. enjoyed

your soul is some thing that make you complete and perfect well done brother and thanks to share

Yaze yanamagama amahle lentombazanyana. Ngiyakubongela kakhulu. Angazi-ke ukuthi ubani owakukhohlisa wathi akuyona enye yezinkondlo zakho eziphambili lezi ngoba wayekukhohlisa nje. Inhle kakhulu lenkondlo futhi ibonisa uthando olukhulu lukababa endodakazini yakhe. Into engasajwayelekile nje ngoba amadoda amaningi avele adle phansi nje uma eke ezwa igama llokuthi kuza ingane.

I really enjoyed this excellent piece of poetry. Your daughter as you have so lovely written about in this poem have your unconditional love. She really pulls at your heart string. Children are a blessing from above and they should always be treated that way. A named called Soul have a very unique meaning. It goes really deep. Made my heart skip a beat. Thanks for a good read.

She is lucky, I must say too lucky! Very nice poem!

Great lines, so deep full of love and soul!

Beautiful poem - very heartfelt.

A beautiful poem expressing the fatherly feelings for your tender daughter! As Elena has rightly put it. she must have started placing her first baby steps! It is a pleasure to see her grow from a toddler to a tiny tot!

Oh my...i must have read this poem a thousand times and it still makes my eyes water, my heart slows, and my spirit becomes warm. I really love this poem because yes, my life has changed. ;) Great work like always.

The little Lubanzi now may walk with the help of your hand. May her diamond smile shine with happiness each day of her life! Touching poem, thank you for share!

This poem is nice :)))

Sweet for show.thats a sign of true lv

lovely poem... a great gift for your newborn...

Wow a sweet heartwarmin poetic poem 4 yor newborn! Enjoyd d epic. Im a sister

very deep beautiful sentimental write!

So beautiful and true! It's my grief too. Because, being a service holder I can not take care of my daughter.You told here, my words also. It's a universal theme! Thanks for sharing.

I must say my nxumalo, this poem almost my me cry...from joy :) it was a wonderful read and i loved the fact that you love you baby girl lol, keep in touch, keep writing.

Pruceless! The love and affection between father and daughter flows wiht every line you wrote. It wasnt only Soul who was born but you too.reminds me of Colridge's Frost At Midnight. Thank you for sharing SOUL with us.

Now I can say my life has changed too... This is a real sweet poem.. I loved and felt each and every word... It's wonderful.. And we can see you are a proud parent... I must say we at PH are a family and you have set an example by keeping her name after US... A child is the cutest, sweetest and the best gift.. I have taken care of many of my cousins and it really felt this way... Their little fingers clutching your finger.. the eyes wandering.. the beautiful expressions they give.. They are the amazing... :) Nice writing Siya, it's really very kind and sweet. Wishing you and your family the best times :)

Thats a beautiful written piece. I enjoyed it.