Saturday, May 23, 2009
My Sons Comments
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My sons, you are slowly growing
away from the babies I remember.
Every passing day I wish you were still
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8/2/2025 2:42:05 AM # 1.0.0
I like that this has more punctuation.... punctuation makes it easier for your reader to read your work and what your trying to get across. 'My sons, how I ache to keep you here, yet I also hope you have a child of your own.' those lines show good emotion. readers like to know that the writer is human. good job here. Becca