The day we met
It was sunny and bright
We drove for hours and hours
To the place where you were kept
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This is a nice poem and the interesting thing about it is your emotions that are being shown in this poem. It was really strong and I can tell that you love your boy very much and children bring so much joy into peoples lives because they are so innocent and pure in the heart. So may this child keep you inspired to keep writing and keep your motivation high. Andrew Burant
I can tell you are a parent who cares. Many do not care today. Keep writing. I just wrote a few new ones. I think you will enjoy 'Little One, Little Voice' and also 'Inside Her Little World'...there are others. Thank you...
BEAUTIFUL! ! Your poems about your kids really touch my heart, Scott, as there are so many Dad's that do not take care of their kids. Kids need a Mom and a Dad! ! Barbara
Its a nice poem and what for i gave u 10 marks is becz u have put the feelings of a father in the poem and i came to know frm this poem that i have a big heart to give u 10 marks. u deserve it my frd.
So touching this poem is. I am glad to have read it. For what does a newborn do to a family, but brings light to all.
Beautiful, a piece that should be placed in his baby book for the year he has his own son. From you work one can tell you Sir, are a loving father.
A touching poem beautifully written about your son...a 10 definitely