Tuesday, July 19, 2011

My Son Comments

Rating: 2.4

My son, I can see so many good things in you
And here I am really honest and true.
My son, I love it when your caring heart opens wide
When I had a headache you came and sat by my side
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Aufie Zophy
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Laura Cairella 16 May 2022

My own son is turning 14 and he is excatly as you describe yours, and I feel exactly as you do towards him. Thanks for expressing so sweetly feelings so deep.

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Wonderful father of a wonderful son. Loved it.

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Bharati Nayak 22 January 2022

My son, I do understand that being 14 is quite challenging There are so many things changing But please my very lovely son, Keep on bringing out the good that's in you, please keep on.

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Bharati Nayak 22 January 2022

Such a beautiful and touching write.Very inspiring.

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A B Faniki 02 September 2019

What a beauty it is to a father a to see beauty in ur kids. Dear poet u have painted a greate image

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 July 2019

An endearing piece of poetry! The first stanza itself articulates everything! Loved reading this beautiful poem...10

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 March 2019

Keep on bringing out the good that’s in you, ... Very loving and touching advice every parent must give. Its simplicity is its very beauty.

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Prabir Gayen 02 March 2019

My son, I do understand that being 14 is quite challenging There are so many things changing But please my very lovely son, Keep on bringing out the good that’s in you, please keep on. Nice one

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Bri Edwards 22 October 2018

(cont.) you've told me he is an adopted child, and i congratulate on ap-PARENT-ly getting a 'good one, and him for apparently getting a good Papa! STRANGELY enough, for the first time IN AGES i.e. 'in a long time' i, today, on PH, used the word Papa, but at first misspelled it Pappa; i then researched online and found a precursor to Papa was a Greek word pappa! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 22 October 2018

i'd just be one of many who have 'praised' your poem/words, so i won't! ha ha. but i could, i suppose. i hope he continues to shine in your eyes and continues to be a thoughtful/perhaps even loving....son. to MyPoemList. i wonder if your son has read/heard the poem. (cont.)

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Riza Braholli 04 August 2018

oh am I and a dad... How nice it is when we talk to our sons like that, honestly! A Big 10 ++++++ congrats poet dr. Riza

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 July 2018

This is a truly lovely poem from the heart. A son oft inherits one of the parents' talents, I reckon. So mature and wise to guide him where he 's the best in. A heartwarming poem for sure. Thank you for sharing the fascinating poetic words. A 10+++++++ and much much more for the rating.

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Luo Zhihai 16 July 2017

You have a good son!

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Tom Allport 17 June 2017

a wonderful poem of the love and nurturing given to one who is doing his best to please you? ...............beautifully written

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Rajnish Manga 07 October 2016

But please my very lovely son, Keep on bringing out the good that’s in you, please keep on. / A sweet and simple poem reflecting the sentiments of a father appreciating the talents of his son. Loved reading it.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 October 2016

A beautiful poem describing sentiments of a loving father for his lovely son. Sharing it on facebook.

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Raiven Moore 26 August 2016

I have twin boys aged 11 so I totally 'get it'..I hope he brings you many years of inspiration and your pride and caring is obvious through those lines

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Clarence Prince 13 February 2016

These are most encouraging words from a Dad to His Son Showing much love and appreciation.

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Ernest Makuakua 04 January 2016

Beautiful poem and i hope he stays bringing out the best in him thanks for sharing keep writing

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 December 2015

my son, your ability to love, your talents, your future, your thoughts. let it not go in vain. remain true to your call to be a loving being. thank you for the wonderful thoughts. tony

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