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Short... But full of Purporst .. Ramin

Simple write with nice fell and flow.Lovely.

WHEN UR SON GROWS BIG AND WILL BE ABLE TO READ IT....HE WILL BE PROUD TO READ THIS......BEAUTIFUL POEM

melting in oneness...........just cuddling with purrity in oneness......

simple yet amazing lines.... you have portrayed truth of life here. Read two of my poems that I wrote for my daughters: LONG LIVE THE ICE CREAM and LITTLE PAINTER....Shall be grateful for your comments