James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Thursday, May 14, 2009

My Snail Comments

Rating: 3.5

You talk, it glides
You walk, it rides.
You speak, as if you know it. Will never die.
You were my very first, a snail, formed from the first.
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Bright Rose 17 May 2009

such a lovely poem, sooooo sweet, well done

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Nice poem, nice to read,10++

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aye.. not bad. not bad! excellent.

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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