Wednesday, March 19, 2014

My Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yes I may be the weak,
But I'm the strongest one here,
It's just no one knows that it's him whom I fear,
Look into my eyes, for they tell a story so dark,
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Paloma Castaneda
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Jazib Kamalvi 01 August 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Paloma C. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 July 2017

Very beautiful poem Listen to the tremble in my voice, Look up to see how my eyes are tearing up... But then, look at my smile, the most deceiving part of me, And then you'll believe when I say everything is alright. ... is so nice. Loved it.

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Chuy Amante 19 March 2014

WOW! Love it. Perhaps you are the peaceful volcano, a day before eruption!

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