** My Small Little Secret ** Comments

I am a fan of ur love poems.. if u dont allow me to fall in love with u, I may surely fall in love with Anjali, the poetess in those marvellous poems. But this time I have caught u on the wrong foot....dear poetess First, u used Sleeped... wrong word. it should be immediately corrected u know 'Slept' in place of 'sleeped' Secondly, Ur conclusion is nearly a copy of the very famous lines of Shelley's To a Skylark' where the bird is compared to glow worms... Nevertheless dont get disheartened because u have excelled in the very art of writing love poems - at once sensuous and ever heart-touching: I could not resist the temptation to quote some lines as my old age is responsible for loss of memory: here are the beautiful lines shining with poetic glow... Sweet as u lay, on my lap like cream In those dreadful dreams, tinged with the rainbows of my love Soaked with saline tears That fell like snow pearls Crimson and red, my eyes betrayed Yes its you, Fantastic, Anjali, only u can write these lines... Ratan Bhattacharjee

what a fabulous creation anjali.................kudos!

Very beautiful work as always. The words flow delicately and create a passionate piece. Excellent work.

The music of your words, rings sweet and soothens

Wonderful work, nice rhythmic feel to it, and the words flow smoothly.

An intriguing work, Anjali. Nicely done.

Oh! Oh! the secret is out now.

good morning dear one.. I opened on you before even reading my messages orany thing else...you know what i mean...come will sip a coffee now..

beautiful poem perfect length dont worry about what they say beneath

not bad, id shorten it up a bit but, not bad.

I think i will read it twice, thrice..for the course of the essence u contained is little long though i feel i have senses ur smaal little secret! Anju u are incredible!

very expressive poem. a great one from a great poet.voted10 surya

very expressive poem. a great one from a great poet.voted10 surya

With each new piece you create...a new colour of your soul is born....you are a writer of many colours my lovely.....keep them flowing my friend....keep painting the hearts of many with that vibrant poetic soul...... be sure to stop by my page, I've a few new colours for you to see.......

A nicely revealed secret with good imagery.....good one

Anjali, It has charactor and depth... condense it as much as you can... you have a beautiful poem here. Deva

a beautiful poem penned down by goddess of creative art. love and pain flowing together. written with your self in it.

this small little secret is written in very beautiful lines..this is nicely done..grace

....... too long for my liking.........passionately written anjali..

Written with a dramatic flair. Your refrain is compelling. Your imagery very vivid.10/10 for this passionate write. Warm regards, Sandra