Saturday, April 27, 2013

My Slim Bark Comments

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My slim bark, my slim bark

Glides smoothly cross the lake.
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Doug Blair
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Brian Johnston 19 April 2014

Reminds me that astoundingly I have yet to write a poem about canoeing. What an oversight! Into my future poem list. Thank you! From my youth when I spent a summer in a boy's camp on Cass Lake in Minnesota (the Mississippi River flows through Cass Lake) I have loved both canoeing and canoe camping. I can already feel the birth of at least two poems because of your poem. We are both Christians as well. You would probably like my poems 'So Many Questions' and 'One Man's Miracle.' Look forward to reading more of your work!

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Dave Walker 27 April 2013

A great poem, reminds me of when I used to go canoeing as a school boy.

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